You
Your ambling pace
Tells my nerves to slow.
Steady, steady steps
Lifts my feet and fears in tow.
***
You
Just like the constant sun
A spot in my horizon
Reach for me and I’m done.
***
Rising east and falling west
Ever lasting rays of light
Does warm me like a well loved sweater
Wrap me in such pure delight.
***
You
You carry my heart
and it feels light as a feather.
Imperfect souls
Perfectly together.
Hello! This is the first poem I have ever written, never attempted one before but wanted to give it a try. This is for a special someone and to celebrate an important day in my life. There is a little surprise for them that I have managed to slip within, so that this can only be for them. I love you bub, xoxo
Nice job, budding poet!
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Thank you ๐
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I canโt believe this is your first poem! Itโs lovely!
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Thank you! I guess I had a good muse haha ๐
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Well done Helen. It has a nice rhythm and emotional tone.
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Aww, thank you ๐
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It’s a lucky person who is recognized / addressed (and so finely recognized / addressed at that) in another’s initial foray into poetry. Well done. And welcome aboard. I should warn you, though: poetry has stolen many a talented medical student away from their initial doctoral intent, so beware. Fair warning.
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Thank you very much ๐ Ahaha oh no, I hope to be able to multi-task and do both! Thank you for the warning, fingers crossed I don’t have to sacrifice either
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So sweet!
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Aww sweet. But loving your blog tittle. Confessions of a Dr to be
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Beautiful words. Please don’t stop
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Thank you ๐
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Lovely, Helen.
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Thank you!
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“You
Just like the constant sun
A spot in my horizon
Reach for me and Iโm done.”
More of this; this is great.
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