You

Posted on by Helen Qin

You

Your ambling pace

Tells my nerves to slow.

Steady, steady steps

Lifts my feet and fears in tow.

***

You

Just like the constant sun

A spot in my horizon

Reach for me and I’m done.

***

Rising east and falling west

Ever lasting rays of light

Does warm me like a well loved sweater

Wrap me in such pure delight.

***

You

You carry my heart

and it feels light as a feather.

Imperfect souls

Perfectly together.

Hello! This is the first poem I have ever written, never attempted one before but wanted to give it a try. This is for a special someone and to celebrate an important day in my life. There is a little surprise for them that I have managed to slip within, so that this can only be for them. I love you bub, xoxo

18 thoughts on “You”

  4. It’s a lucky person who is recognized / addressed (and so finely recognized / addressed at that) in another’s initial foray into poetry. Well done. And welcome aboard. I should warn you, though: poetry has stolen many a talented medical student away from their initial doctoral intent, so beware. Fair warning.

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