It watches, a silent stage
The curtain rises on your fateful day,
No claps, no sighs, no words of praise
The world gives nothing but your days.
***
You trip, you fall, you scrape your knee,
It watches, whispers but does not weep.
For doors stay closed unless you turn
Those gold brass handles you always yearn.
***
No expectations of joy or loss,
No lines, no songs nor timely prompts
You write your scenes and cast your play
The world has no part and nothing left to say.
***
Neither friend and neither foe but
A wooden floor you scratch with your toe.
Leave your mark and wonder how
The world drops its curtains as you take your bow.
Very nice poem Dr. It must feel like that sometimes for you. I have been watching a documentary called Pandemic on Netflix and there is a County Dr. who does 72 hour shifts at a hospital and I am guessing she felt like that some days. You deal with life and death every day. I salute you Dr. and all medical folks who work so hard. I hope you are being blessed as well. I love the comparison to the stage because you are performing for others all the time. Take care of yourself and so glad you are there. Love and hugs Joni
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Thank you Joni π I think it’s a sentiment that can be applied to everyone, opportunities are something we have to create and cannot depend on the world to bestow. Just have to keep grinding and not take anything for granted π
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The world gives us glorious sunrises and sunsets, The warmth of the sun on a cold day, Glimpses of dolphins playing and whales blowing, Majestic mountains to scale and valleys to explore. The good comes with the bad and the bad with a good.
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Amazing, I love it! Yin to the yang
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Yes.
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It watches, whispers but does not weep.
Grand, if sad, description of an unfeeling world. I guess there are exceptions, found in a few persons maybe we are privileged to know. Good, open, authentic work.
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Awesome poem keep up the good work!
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Thank you π
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Wow, that beautiful and deep… well done β€
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Amen so true Dr. blessings to you, your work and your family. Love π Joni
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Awesome!
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Beautiful poem. It shows a journey of maturity and moving beyond the parental home and into the real world. Such is life and welcome! “”__””
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Thank you!
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Great poem. Truly tells it like it is.
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A lovely, and deeply meaningful poem. π
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Nice picture π
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I love it, if you sang this poem it would basically be an Alanis Morrissette song….
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Aww thank you so much! π
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Helen, You’ve got a beautiful way with words – in this poem and your other writing.
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Thank you Owen, that’s very kind of you.
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Beautifully penned…
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This is excellent! I really, really liked it.
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Thank you π
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Welcome π
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Really great! It has such deep meaningπ
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Thank you π
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